Answer Choices
kept, because it elaborates on a key term that is used in the paragraph
kept, because it adds an additional detail that supports the main point of the paragraph
deleted, because it distracts from the paragraph's discussion by introducing irrelevant information.
deleted, because it merely repeats information that is found earlier in the passage.
Explanation for Question 19 From the Writing Section on the 2018 March Sat
Hey guys. So question 19 says the writer is considering deleting the underlying 2 sentence. Should the sentence be kept or deleted? 3 The sentence says, moreover, it seemed to her that popular music typically intended 4 for light entertainment and not provide the dignity. 5 The subject matter deserves. Whenever we have a question like this, 6 we have to make sure that we need to read around it. 7 And let's just do that by just reading the paragraph and fall. 8 This tells us someones unease about playing more vocal part in the movement, 9 uh, were based largely on her misgivings about mixing politics with popular music. 10 She thought that a three minute song was too brief to adequately convey a 11 nuanced political message. Moreover, 12 it seems her that popular music typically intended for light entertainment did not provide 13 the digging to ne that dignity, 14 the subject matter to serve. She feared that noble ideas would be cheap. 15 And if express to the tune of a pop song Hansberry, 16 however Archer to reconsider. So this is telling us, 17 um, that she is worried not only is this music too short to 18 give a good political message, but that popular music itself is too light. 19 And it's not giving dignity to the complex subject matter. 20 Now we can already know that this seems to be adding something 21 to the paragraph. Doesn't seem to be unrelated. 22 It seems to be connected. And moreover, 23 it talks about it right after she feared that noble ideas would be cheapen...