[Video] Q31: The writer wants to add the following sentence to the paragraph. after filling out a simple registration form and taking a quick tour of the facility, i took a seat at a table and got right to work on my laptop. the best placement for the sentence is immediately

Explanation for Question 31 From the Writing Section on the Official Sat Practice Test 1

So question 31 is asking us if the writer should add the following sentence 2 or where they should add it, they should add it after filling out a 3 simple registration form and taking a quick tour of the facility. 4 I took a seat at the table and got right to work on my 5 laptop. So they filled out a registration form, 6 took a tour and got to work. And so what we're going to do 7 here is we're just going to go through each of these places here and 8 see if it makes sense for that sense to go there, 9 do the ideas flow. Now, if we put this first, 10 right, if we put it before sentence one, our reader would have a lot 11 of questions. Like first off, what facility is this? 12 We wouldn't know where they were. We don't know what type of work they're 13 doing. We don't know why they filled out the registration form. 14 This would be a bad way to start the paragraph because we would still 15 have a lot of questions. Now, 16 if we look at after sentence one, so let's reset this one. 17 It says, thus, even though I already had all the equipment I needed in 18 my office, I decided to try using a coworking space in my city 19 after filling out a registration form, taking a quick tour. 20 So there's still a bit of gap of information here, 21 right? Because they decided to use a coworking space. 22 And then all of a sudden they're inside of a coworking space. 23 So we don't get that middle bit of information where they actually went to 24 the coworking space. So there's still a little ...