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Explanation for Question 38 From the Writing Section on the 2019 March Sat

So question number 38, we are looking at punctuation. 2 So we are being presented with, 3 um, information about a particular Zookeeper's experience. 4 And we want to introduce that zookeeper in the most effective way possible. 5 So the sentence right now, rates the experience of mega names zookeeper 6 at Cambridge park zoo, and Attleboro, 7 Massachusetts shows how seriously zookeepers take their work. 8 So what we need to do is, um, we identify that this character, 9 Megan names, the subject, um, 10 is the main focus of our sentence. Um, 11 and then we see that this additional details provided to provide context about 12 that, that person. So who is Megan names, 13 a zookeeper at this in Massachusetts? 14 So this is an important detailed sort of clarify who we're talking about here, 15 but ultimately the main subject is Megan names. 16 Um, so what we need to do is set aside this detail about who 17 Megan names is, um, 18 because we want to present her as the main subject and then this clarifying 19 detail thereafter. 20 So the idea is to set that detail sort of aside. 21 So the reader can pause, take in that detail, 22 understand the context and keep moving through the sentence. 23 Um, and this sentence should function well enough without that detail of a zookeeper 24 at this duo in Massachusetts. So the experience in Megan BM shows how seriously 25 zookeepers take their work is the idea. 26 So on either side of that aside, 27 we want to make sure we're using the same type of...