[Video] Q10: No change or so that it powers or for powering of or powering

Explanation for Question 10 From the Writing Section on the 2018 May Sat

Question number 10, the sentence currently reads, 2 um, the Park's design also features a solar station that will produce enough energy 3 to power more than 2000 homes. 4 So what we want to do here with question number 10 is just get 5 our point across to the reader as clearly as possible. 6 Um, without complicating this construction of our sentence. 7 So the Park's design also features solar station that will produce enough energy to 8 power more than 2000 homes. 9 There's nothing wrong with this sentence as is. It's clear it's not unnecessarily wordy 10 and functions pretty well. So really big chance that we're going to go with 11 the no change option here for this question, 12 but taking a look at our other answer choices, 13 choice basis so that it powers more than 2000 homes. 14 Um, if we kind of fill that in here, 15 uh, it's designed also features a solar station that will produce enough energy so 16 that it powers more than 2000 homes. 17 It's a little bit wordier than it needs to be to power is 18 a little bit more clear. It's more concise and it throws less words at 19 our reader, a choice. See sort of the same thing for powering of 20 more than 2000 homes. Again, 21 it doesn't necessarily say anything too grammatically incorrect think as she was 22 just said, it's not as clear and it's not as concise as it potentially 23 could be. Um, and D powering, 24 um, the issue there is that we don't have sort of a comma ahead 25 of D um, if the sentence read it's design also...