Explanation for Question 10 From the Writing Section on the 2017 April Sat
Number tens as to make this paragraph most logical sentence two should be placed 2 where, so we're dealing with the ordering of the sentences in this paragraph. 3 Let's take a look at sentence two. First sentence. 4 Two says, despite these clear benefits, 5 some of the patients and medical professionals still Harbor concerns about 6 the potential for error and the violation of patient privacy when electronic records are 7 used. So we want to make sure that what comes kind of before this, 8 um, transition phrase is benefits and what follows is kind of the 9 opposite of benefits, um, what the costs may be are. 10 So you note that the previous paragraph was all about the benefits. 11 Um, it makes sense to include this detail kind of at the beginning, 12 um, or potentially following the, 13 um, details down at the bottom of this paragraph, 14 which explained how electronic health record systems can reduce errors. 15 And what really gives this question away though, is if we just start off 16 by reading this paragraph through, we'll notice right away, 17 this first sentence doesn't quite fit. 18 It says these concerns, however, also problems for paper records. 19 However, it's not clear what concerns we're talking about. 20 Um, it says these concerns, but because there haven't been concerns addressed 21 by the previous paragraph here, we're not sure what concerns are being referenced, 22 which is a sign that, um, something actually has to come in front of 23 the sentence within thi...