Answer Choices
NO CHANGE
headline in the New York Times, declared
headline, in the New York Times declared,
headline, in the New York Times, declared
Explanation for Question 34 From the Writing Section on the Official Sat Practice Test 7
34 says the next day, 2 a front page headline in the New York times declared radio listeners in panic, 3 taking war drama as fact. So it looks like they're giving us the name 4 of a headline in quotes and all of our answer choices, 5 exact same words, but with different comma placements, 6 some of them have a comma after headline. 7 Some have it after New York times and some have it after declared. 8 So our job is to figure out which of those columns do we need 9 and which do we not need? I'm going to start by breaking down. 10 Just the underlined portion. Notice that there is 11 this word in here in is a very common preposition. 12 And that makes the New York times a propositional phrase. 13 And we do not need commas before or after prepositional phrases when 14 they're in the middle of a sentence like this. So we can already see 15 that B is wrong because we don't need this comma here C 16 is wrong because we don't need a comma before our prepositional phrase and 17 D is also wrong. 18 Because again, we don't need to come up before our propositional phrase or after 19 it. So even though that leaves us with a, 20 and that is the correct answer here, I want to explain one more thing. 21 The comma after declared the rule with this is 22 because you have a quote here, even though it's not a quote, 23 like someone said something, it's still a quote and it comes after one of 24 those action words like declared. 25 You can think of it, like said, whenever you say something, 26 like he said, and then you directly quote whatever he said, 27 you need that comma before the quotation marks, 28 same things goes for, he declared. 29 It's one of those action words. That means that someone is essentially saying something 30 in quotes. So that is why you need to calm after declared. 31 And that is why a no change is going to be the correct answer 32 here.