[Video] Q10: Which choice most effectively combines the sentences at the underlined portion?

Explanation for Question 10 From the Writing Section on the 2021 May Sat (International)

Hey guys. So question 10 is going to be a concision question, 2 which means we need to cut out the language that is repeating itself when 3 we're doing, um, combining sentences effectively. 4 So it's asking us which choice was effectively combines the sentences here. 5 The sentences read the tower was also designed by Ono Ono. 6 His tower is a beam of light that shines each winter from base carved 7 of stone and the Aurora graced Icelandic night. 8 So we need to combine the part that's saying there was a tower that 9 was designed by Ono, which is a, 10 um, has a beam of light or no, which is a beam of light 11 that shines each winter, blah, blah, blah. 12 So, um, this tower was designed by her and it does this. 13 It was like their options option a, it says the tower was also an 14 owner design. Additionally, it blank. 15 The problem with this is it's saying also twice, 16 it's saying also, and additionally, it's saying that the tower was also blank 17 and, um, it blank. 18 Um, we don't need to do that. We need to make sure that we're 19 only saying like also, 20 uh, twice, uh, or one time, 21 excuse me. So the second option that's is doing something 22 similar. It's saying, although also an owner design the tower blank. 23 We just need to say at once, although an owner design, 24 the tower did this, or also an owner design and the tower did this, 25 when we say the tower was also an only design, 26 additionally, it did this. We're just using redundant language. 27 It's when ...