[Video] Q7: No change or of these or ions or delete the underlined portion

Explanation for Question 7 From the Writing Section on the 2019 March Sat

For question number seven, we have to essentially revise how 2 this detail about the anodes retaining about 13% more than 3 conventional. Anodes how we present that to the reader. 4 So the issue with the sentence as it reads now is that we have 5 this phrase of them, which makes it a little bit unclear exactly what we're 6 talking about. We always want to be more specific and avoid using pronouns and 7 less. It's really clear what we are referring to. 8 So the no change option is incorrect. 9 We want to be more specific than have them. 10 Um, answer twice B is similarly problematic. 11 The issue with a was not the actual framing of whether we use them 12 or these, the issue was, 13 um, whether we were using a pronoun at all. 14 So be as similarly eliminated answer choice C is correct because 15 it actually specifies exactly what we're talking about. 16 The anodes retained about 13% more ions. 17 This makes our point much clearer to the reader and then answer twice day 18 deleting the underlined portion. Again, 19 doesn't fix our problem of meeting to be more specific. 20 This just says 13% more, which will confuse the reader and bank. 21 The question 13% more. What? So answer choice C gets our point 22 across most effectively. And that's our correct answer to number seven.