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Explanation for Question 30 From the Writing Section on the 2019 March Sat

Question 30 represents a question type that we see quite frequently where we need 2 to rewrite part of a sentence to make it as brief yet as meaningful 3 as possible. So for this question, 4 we're going to want to eliminate any unnecessary words in these answer choices. 5 Um, and also just to make sure that we're getting our point across effectively. 6 So we want to cut as many words as we can, 7 but also don't cut out the actual meaning that the sentence is 8 trying to convey. So right now we see the lack of publicity about the 9 competition. Consigned Linden's work to view virtual obscurity. 10 So it seems to work as is, 11 but let's see if there's any way we can make it maybe more brief 12 or more concise. Um, it doesn't appear that there is a way for that 13 to happen, but let's take a look at our answer choices. 14 So choice B says consigned and then relegated Linton's work consigned 15 and relegated here have a redundant meaning. 16 So we don't need to include both of those verbs. 17 So answer choice B is out. And so Tracy says consign, 18 the sculpture violence, and since not many people had heard about it again, 19 that idea of obscurity matches up really well with the idea of not many 20 people had heard about it. So we don't need to include both of those 21 details. So see again is a bit redundant D led. 22 Um, it seems like attempting choice. It's very, 23 very brief only one word answer. 24 Um, however, let's read it back in the sentence to see how this fits 25 th...