[Video] Q44: No change or they also, meanwhile, make a good living for themselves. or simultaneously making a good living for themselves at the same time. or making a good living for themselves is something they can do at the same time.

Explanation for Question 44 From the Writing Section on the 2018 May Sat

Okay, moving on to our final question of the section number 44. 2 Um, we see that we are looking at this last underlined portion. 3 Um, the sentence overall reads consumers are not the only ones for home. 4 Solar powers, a win-win scenario. As a result of their own efforts, 5 industry employees can meet demand for an environmentally friendly service 6 while also making a good living for themselves. 7 So we want to complete this last part of the sentence as smoothly, 8 efficiently, and concisely as possible. 9 Looking at the way the sentence already exists. 10 We said there's not really any previous issues. 11 Um, environmentally friendly service while also making 12 a good living for themselves flow smoothly. 13 And it's not too redundant for any reason. 14 So we're pretty happy with the no change option, 15 but let's take a look at our other choices, answer choice base, 16 as they also, meanwhile, make good living for themselves. 17 Um, if we were to insert this into the 18 sentence, as it stands, now, 19 it would read industry employees can meet demand for an environmentally friendly service 20 while they also meanwhile, make a good living for themselves. 21 This meanwhile is kind of redundant given that we already have while in the 22 sentence leading up to that underlined portion. 23 So we don't need while. And meanwhile, 24 in the sentence that makes it confusing for the reader. 25 We can eliminate choice B answer choice C says simultaneously 26 making a good living for ...