[Video] Q14: Is one method that or is a particular means of storage that or constitutes a form of storage that or delete the underlined portion.

Explanation for Question 14 From the Writing Section on the 2018 April Sat

Hey guys. So question 14 is going to be dealing with concision and redundancy. 2 And what that's going to mean is that we need to concisely say what 3 we need to say and not repeat ourselves previously. 4 So this sentence says a method of storage called compressed air energy storage is 5 one method that may be one of the best solutions to this problem. 6 So this is telling us that this method of storage called this 7 may be one of the best solutions, but the problem with his Porsche. 8 And here's his saying again, that is one method it's like me saying there 9 is one store that I go to. That is one store that has shoes. 10 While I'm saying, once again, that's a store, there's one store. 11 I'm repeating myself in saying that. So when I say a method of storage 12 is one method we're repeating ourselves and being redundant and we're not being concise 13 with language. 14 So what we look at here is that, 15 you know, option a is repeating a method. 16 Option. B says it's a particular means of storage means and method of storage 17 are synonymous. So we're just saying the same thing, synonymously, 18 which is still redundant and C says constitutes a form of storage. 19 So another way of saying form of storage, 20 method of storage, a particular way of storage, 21 these are all things that are just redundant to repeat. 22 What's already said at the start of the sentence, 23 so we can get rid of all these options and just pick D which 24 is delete the underlined portion. We already said that it's a method of storage. 25 We don't need to again, say that it's a method. We can just be, 26 um, confident that our sometimes will stand on its own.