Explanation for Question 11 From the Writing Section on the 2018 April Sat
Hey guys. So question 11 says at this point, 2 the writer's considering adding the following the sentence visitors to Joan's point can also 3 enjoy activities such as fishing and kayaking. 4 Should the writer make this addition here and here, 5 they'd be making this addition at the end of this paragraph. 6 So let's read this paragraph in totality and think, 7 okay. Does the sentence help to add on to an important point made in 8 the passage and is it relevant and is it important? 9 This has Banneker and the rest of the major Ellicott crews set up camp 10 on Jones' point early March, 1791, 11 put in. So extending at the pond Mack river, the point offered an expansive 12 view of the territory. Um, additionally, 13 a national park service plaque at Jones point commemorates the men's contributions and shaping 14 capital on a clear day, looking north across the water. 15 Visitors can see the domes Capitol building rising towards the sky. 16 So in modern day, people can take a look, um, 17 when they're visiting this park and, you know, just look across and visit and 18 commemorate this area where Banneker was. 19 Now this sentence just as visitors to Jones park can also enjoy activities such 20 as fishing and kayaking. And this is fully taking the attention away, 21 attention away from the whole thing about vanacker, 22 you know, that team, the plaque commemorating them. 23 And it really has no reference cause this whole thing is about Holland in 24 the capital had to get built. Th...